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Why is hiring an editor so expensive?

When I started my business fifteen years ago, I wanted to offer really good services that I could afford. At the time, I thought $6 burritos were expensive and lived in my landlord’s attic. Small-business wisdom says that this type of thinking is a bad idea. Instead, supposedly, I should have charged as much as I possibly could. The sky’s the limit! I didn’t like…

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Threepenny Editor Annual Writing Contest: Announcing the Winner!

Congratulations, Christine Evans! This year’s contest entries were, if possible, even stronger than last year’s. It was difficult to choose just one, and I agonized for several days over the four finalists’ writing. What finally captured me was an excerpt of NADIA, Christine Evans’ novel-in-progress. NADIA is a novel of love, terror and redemption set in 1990s London. Nadia is a young refugee…

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Beats: Anatomy of a Scene’s Emotional Development

Editing is full of weird coincidences and fortuitous juxtapositions. When the same issue crops up in two or three unrelated manuscripts in a row, it’s time to take it to the blog. I’d like to deconstruct a scene and talk about beats, interior dialogue, and clarity. First, some working definitions. A beat is a minor emotional turning point in a scene between the…

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Enter the 2016-17 Free Edit Contest: Rules and Guidelines

**Update: Results will be announced on November 10, due to the high volume of excellent submissions. Stay tuned!** In honor of my business’s upcoming birthday on February 1, 2017, I am proud to offer a chance to win free novel editing from me. No strings attached–just submit your query and first two chapters by October 15, and one manuscript will win free editing services…

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Annual Free Edit Contest

Watch this space: Coming in September, I will post more details about Threepenny’s annual free edit contest. The prize will be a free notes-and-critique service the first week of February 2017. In the meantime, polish those query letters and first 50 pages! Eligible writers include novelists in any genre who have never worked with me before. Please share this teaser on…

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Put Your Manuscript on a Diet: 3 Steps to Reduce Your Word Count

Listen to your instinct, improve your writing, and reduce word count. Debut novels are usually 80,000 to 90,000 words. YA novels are often less than that. Having edited an unusually high number of overlong manuscripts this year, here are some top cuts to reduce word count that I find myself recommending in almost every project.    1. Reduce word count by paring down dialogue and…

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Client Spotlight: C. E. Tobisman (DOUBT)

Coming in August! Debut author Cindy Tobisman will see DOUBT, the first novel in a series of Caroline Auden legal thrillers, launched by Amazon’s Thomas & Mercer publishing company. Congratulations! About the book: When Caroline Auden lands a job at a top law firm in Los Angeles, she’s excited for the challenge—and grateful for the chance to put her dark past as…

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Two huge announcements!

Threepenny welcomes short story editor Janice Obuchowski: The Threepenny Editor is thrilled to welcome Janice Obuchowski to our editing team. Janice is a fiction editor at the New England Review and has served on the admissions board for the Bread Loaf Writers’ Conference. She has been a lecturer in creative writing at the University of Vermont and Middlebury College. Her fiction appears in Gettysburg Review, Passages North, Slice,…

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New service: The $200 layout!

Page layout for novels & ebooks: Threepenny’s partner and pro book designer Phillip Gessert has developed a new, trimmer approach to page layout. It lets us do the biggest design job in publishing at a third of the normal cost. For novels, we can do ebook+print layout for $200. They’re bundled because Phillip builds them both in tandem. The quality is comparable with his custom work, but…

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Writing Contest: Winner Announced

I’m delighted to congratulate Siel Ju on winning this year’s writing contest. Siel holds a Ph.D. in Literature and Creative Writing from the University of Southern California. She is the author of two poetry chapbooks: Feelings Are Chemicals in Transit from Dancing Girl Press and Might Club from Horse Less Press. Her poems and stories appear in Denver Quarterly, Drunken Boat, The Missouri Review, ZYZZYVA, Hobart, LIT, and other places. Siel’s…

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